homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi there, Ms. [Name]!
Thanks for your composition today! It\'s really hard to choose between the two. If I had to choose, I would rather be loved. In this life, I know how it feels to love and be loved back. Nothing compares to the feeling of bliss if you love and be loved in return. I don\'t want to be hurt, so I\'d rather not feel love but be loved by someone.^^
T. JanE ^^
this time homework is too hard subject to think.
>> This time, the topic of the homework is very hard.
but i should consider this subject to do homework.
>> But I should consider this topic in order to answer my homework.
first of all, i don\'t want to be loved from whom i don\'t love because i feel guilty to him and also me.
>> First of all, I don\'t want to be loved by someone I can\'t love in return because I will feel guilty towards and him and to myself as well.
and the first part also i don\'t want to do.
>> I don\'t want to love without being loved in return, either.
it\'s torture to me if i love him alone.
>> It\'s a torture to suffer from unrequited love.
maybe i would feel sick about doing that soon.
>> Maybe I would soon feel sick doing that.
So i love my self more than any others not to get seriou hurts.
>> So I will just love myself more than others in order not to get seriously hurt.
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