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2017-08-17 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

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this time homework is too hard subject to think. but i should consider this subject to do homework. first of all, i don't want to be loved from whom i don't love because i feel guilty to him and also me. and the first part also i don't want to do. it's torture to me if i love him alone. maybe i would feel sick about doing that soon. So i love my self more than any others not to get seriou hurts.

강사 첨삭

Hi there, Ms. [Name]!

Thanks for your composition today! It\'s really hard to choose between the two. If I had to choose, I would rather be loved. In this life, I know how it feels to love and be loved back. Nothing compares to the feeling of bliss if you love and be loved in return. I don\'t want to be hurt, so I\'d rather not feel love but be loved by someone.^^

T. JanE ^^

this time homework is too hard subject to think.

>> This time, the topic of the homework is very hard.

but i should consider this subject to do homework.

>> But I should consider this topic in order to answer my homework. 

first of all, i don\'t want to be loved from whom i don\'t love because i feel guilty to him and also me.

>> First of all, I don\'t want to be loved by someone I can\'t love in return because I will feel guilty towards and him and to myself as well. 

and the first part also i don\'t want to do.

>> I don\'t want to love without being loved in return, either. 

it\'s torture to me if i love him alone.

>> It\'s a torture to suffer from unrequited love. 

maybe i would feel sick about doing that soon.

>> Maybe I would soon feel sick doing that. 

So i love my self more than any others not to get seriou hurts. 

>> So I will just love myself more than others in order not to get seriously hurt. 

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