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Yesterday i went to cafe for a trial and i did a trial for 2hours 

>> Yesterday, I went to the café for a trial for 2 hours.
 When i work in the cafe , i had to do other things while i was cooking
like i was serving a plate that i made and taking order something like that 

>> If I will work in the café, I had to do other things aside from cooking. I also have to serve and order taking.
 Fortunately, it`s so easy to understand english what they said.

>> Fortunately, it was easy for me to understand the English of the customers.
 I could understand without difficulty.
>> Correct
1. While I was away on holiday, my sister fell ill and I had to come home.
>> Correct
2. By the time we reached Frankfurt I already was very tired of driving.
>> was already
3. There was a terrible atmosphere in the room. They had had an argument just before I came.
>> Correct
4. First she was a teacher, then she became a journalist.
>> Correct
5 I gave my friend directions to my house, but later realised that I forgot to give her the exact address.
>> had forgotten
6. I got to work this morning and was angry when I saw that no one arrived yet. 

>>  had arrived
 7. He awoke thinking he was in a prison and that he\'d been arrested for robbery. He then realised that it all was just a bad dream

>> had all been
 8. Michael had a black eye. It looked as if he was

>> had all been