homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi Kiddo,
Thanks for answering your homework.
The question is a matter of opinion, so there is no correct or incorrect answer.
It\'s how you justify your opinion that matters.
And you justified your answer well enough.
I just added a few supporting statements to solidify your ground.
See you tonight!
Teacher Amanda:)
Which do you think came first, the chicken or the egg? Please explain your answer.
I think the egg came first.
Correct
Chicken were born from the egg.
Correct
If the chickens come first, they can\'t protect their body.
>>If the chicken came first, it can\'t protect it\'s body.
Whereas, if the egg came first, the chicken will be there to incubate and protect it until it hatches from it\'s shell and becomes a chick.
This logical and practical reasons leads me to believed that the egg came first.
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