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2017-08-18 · 첨삭 강사 Rose

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What do you rue about these days? What can you do to make yourself feel better? ==> I sometimes regret that I am a team leader at this company. When I was a member of team, I didn't concern about my work because I had confidence about my work. But after becoming a team leader, I cannot enjoy my time at the company. There are many meetings and presentations at the company. So I cannot pay attention because of that. I didn't become a team leader that I wanted. But I have to think seriously for my team. I don't like my role at this company, but I have to care my team members for their life. So I have to make vision and our team role. There are good sentence for me. Enjoy it if it is unavoidable. I will try to enjoy my role....

강사 첨삭

Hi, Boss!

I think you are a great leader. Besides, you wouldn\'t be given that role if not for the goodness they\'ve seen in you. I am so happy for you! Of course, there are some disadvantages, but the advantages likely outweigh them. What do you think? Cheer up now! Look on the bright side, James.

Well, tomorrow, you need to work again. If there\'s anything I can help you with, please let me know.
Regards to your family!

-Klein-

What do you rue about these days?
What can you do to make yourself feel better?
 ==>
 I sometimes regret that I am a team leader at this company.

>>I sometimes regret that I am a team leader in this company.
 When I was a member of team, I didn\'t concern about my work because I had confidence about my work.

>>When I was a member of the team, I wasn\'t concerned about my work because I had confident in it.
 But after becoming a team leader, I cannot enjoy my time at the company.

>>Correct
 There are many meetings and presentations at the company.

>>Correct
 So I cannot pay attention because of that.
>>So I cannot pay attention to my work.

I didn\'t become a team leader that I wanted.

>>I didn\'t become the team leader I wanted.
 But I have to think seriously for my team.
 
>>Correct

I don\'t like my role at this company, but I have to care my team members for their life.
 
>>I don\'t like my role at this company, but I have to care about my team members for their life.

So I have to make vision and our team role. 
>>So, I have to make a vision and our team\'s role.

There are good sentence for me.
>>There are good sentences for me.
Enjoy it if it is unavoidable.
>>Correct
I will try to enjoy my role.

>>Correct

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