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2017-08-18 · 첨삭 강사 Sunday

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What are the views of adoption in your country? The adoption is very good but infact i have been saying to not good result That's what i heard from my client adopted child grew up without being loved so they can't reflect on thereself and try to look well adopted parents feels distant and adopted child have many accidents In conclusion adoption is very good but it is need to approach carefully

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The adoption is very good but infact i have been saying to not good result
>> Adoption is a very good idea but the truth is there\'s a lot of negative outcome.
That\'s what i heard from my client
>> That\'s what I heard from my client.
adopted child grew up without being loved
>> An adopted child grew up without the being loved.
so they can\'t reflect on thereself and try to look well
>> So they can\'t reflect on themselves and tried to look well.
adopted parents feels distant and adopted child have many accidents
>> Adopted parents are distant and an adopted child encounter many difficulties.
In conclusion adoption is very good but it is need to approach carefully

>> In my conclusion, adoption is great but it needs a careful approach.

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