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Thank you for telling me your opinion about the composition topic.
When using an acronym, define it first just in case the person reading your essay isn\'t familiar with it.
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==Teacher Charlie==
I support that governments spend more money on improving public transportation. because it is more effective way for overall benefits. when governments spend same money I think it could be getting maximum benefits on improving public transportation than road. it is reasonable to spend money on the SOC that many people use like subways, intercity express trains. the more spending money on public transportation, the less traffic on roads. because as long as the more people use subway and train, the less people is on the road. that is why governments should spend money on improving public transprotation.
>> I support the idea of governments spending more money on improving public transportation because it is more beneficial than if the government would spend the same amount of money on improving roads and highways. It is more reasonable to invest money on Social Overhead Capital (SOC) such as subways and intercity express trains.
If there is further improvement on public transportation, traffic would be less congested because people would prefer to use the public transportation rather than private ones.
This is why I think that governments should invest more on improving public transportation rather than on roads and highways.
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