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==Teacher Charlie==

I think that we had better growing up children in a big city than the countryside. as long as the modern society is getting more complicating and various, the children need to have chances to adapt to them. it is more advantageous for children to grow up in a big city in order to keep up with the world. but there is some important thing for parents to keep in mind. they try to make the good parenting environment for children to enjoy the nature and playing time. in this way, the children could have adaption to the modern world keeping their dream and health to them at the same time.

>> I disagree that children should grow up in the countryside than in a big city because I think that children should be given a chance to adapt to the rapid modernization of society and they can only have this if they grow up in a big city. On the other hand, it would be beneficial for children to be able to enjoy nature and experience a healthier environment that the countryside offer. Therefore, good parents must be able to find a balanced environment for their children to grow up in.