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2017-08-18 · 첨삭 강사 Charlie

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Neighbors are the people who live near us. In your opinion, what are the qualities of a good neighbor? Use specific details and examples in your answer. Most of all, it is important thing of neighbors to have care and concession each other. if someone just insist on his own right and opinion, there would remain nothing but trouble. there is no one who has same thinking and desire in the world. so we should pay attention to other people in order not to make a conflict. that is just care and concession for neighbors and that is virtue that we should have as neighbors

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]gi!

Thank you for answering the composition topic.

Notice that I used the pronoun \'their\' for the word \'person\'. This is accepted if you don\'t want to use gender-specific pronouns like \'he\' or \'she\'.

All good things,

==Teacher Charlie==

Most of all, it is important thing of neighbors to have care and concession each other. if someone just insist on his own right and opinion, there would remain nothing but trouble. there is no one who has same thinking and desire in the world. so we should pay attention to other people in order not to make a conflict. that is just care and concession for neighbors and that is virtue that we should have as neighbors

>> The most important qualities of a good neighbor, in my opinion, are consideration and conscientiousness. If a person would insist on their own rights and opinions, there would be nothing but trouble. The world would probably be in chaos since no one would agree on anything. That is why we should practice being considerate and conscientious towards our neighbors for us to have a peaceful neighborhood.

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