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2017-08-21 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

학생이 쓴 원문

What i think about the love is that i could give it my everything. It is that my concerns are focused on it and i care about it specially. When i visit to nice place, i think to visit here again with it. when i eat delicious food, i think to give it to that. i want to call these things to 'specificity'. i have several special people and things but i don't have yet the most special one. :(

강사 첨삭

Hi there, Ella!

Thanks for your composition! Love is a word that has such a profound meaning. It\'s not easy to define it because we do based on our own experience.^^

T. JanE ^^

What i think about the love is that i could give it my everything.

>> What I think about love is that I could give it my everything. 

It is that my concerns are focused on it and i care about it specially.

>> My concerns are focused on it and I specially care about it. 

When i visit to nice place, i think to visit here again with it.

>> When I visit a nice place, I hope to visit again with love.

when i eat delicious food, i think to give it to that.

>> When I eat delicious food, I think about it. 

i want to call these things to \'specificity\'.

>> I want to call these things specificity. 

i have several special people and things but i don\'t have yet the most special one. :(

>> I have several special people and things, but I don\'t have the most special one yet. 


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