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==Teacher Charlie==
I think that all living things in the earth affect the Earth for better or worse. that is just the result from all activities of living things. there is not any intention of them. as they just keep going on living naturally, they always affect the earth continuously. it is the same story to human. so I think that it is difficult to judge whether human activity harm the earth or not. because if human activity is really destroying the Earth, then human will be disappear gradually in the world. and another living things will replace us and keep going on their life. I think that is the provision of nature.
>> I think that all living things affect the Earth whether it be for the better or for the worse because of all the accumulated activities of each living being be it intentional or not. As time goes by, the effects will also continue. By \'living beings\', humans are also included and that is why it is hard to tell whether human activity causes the Earth harm or not. Although, if human activity does damage the Earth, humans would then gradually disappear and other living things would replace them. That is how nature usually works to repair any damage done to it.
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