homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi there, [이름]!
Thank you very much for doing your homework. You constructed longer sentences this time. That\'s a good improvement.
Anyway, have a good day!^^
~t. Kelly^^
Essay: What was the most memorable present you had ever received?
Why was it memorable? Answer in FIVE (5) sentences.
My phone is a memorable present and I receive recent to my mom.
>> The most memorable present that I had received was the phone which was given by my mom.
The screen is big and mode are very fast.
>> The screen is big and its processor is very fast.
My phone name is LG X-screen.
>> My phone\'s unit is LG X-screen.
I like this present because it have a great design and performance.
>> I like this phone because it has a great design and performance.
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