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2017-08-22 · 첨삭 강사 Glenda

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Hello ~ did you have a good weekend?? i did awesome weekend I had the best first day of the cafe the kitchen was very clean and the people who i worked together are outgoing and very friandly hahaha If there is anything i don`t know , they try to teach me everything like how to prepare crossiants and how to decorate the plate of food If i get a chance ,i`d like to work so long ~~ 1. We have interviewed with twenty candidates for the vacant position, but none of them was actually a good fit. 2.Oakland is about to go bilingual, with two official languages, but both of them is English. 3.On some computers there are keys which can have as many as five different functions each 4. No argument could move either man from this decision. 5. both Peter and Michael come here quite often but neither of them gives us help.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! ^^

Good afternoon :)


Thank you for sending and answering this activity.

I appreciate your effort in sharing something about your everyday life.

It would help you exercise your conversational and writing skills.

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Teacher Glenda


Hello ~ did you have a good weekend?? i did awesome weekend >> I had an awesome weekend. 
 I had the best first day of the cafe the kitchen was very clean and the people who i worked together are outgoing and very friandly hahaha 

>> I had the best first day at the café. The kitchen was very clean and the people I worked with are outgoing and very friendly.
 If there is anything i don`t know , they try to teach me everything
like how to prepare crossiants and how to decorate the plate of food
If i get a chance ,i`d like to work so long ~~

>> If there is anything I don\'t know, they try to teach me how to do it. Like how to prepare croissants and how to decorate the plate. 

If given the chance, I want to work there for long.

 1. We have interviewed with twenty candidates for the vacant position, but
none of them was actually a good fit.
>> Correct
2.Oakland is about to go bilingual, with two official languages, but both
of them is English.
>> neither
3.On some computers there are keys which can have as many as five different
functions each
>>
Correct
4. No argument could move either man from this decision.
>> Correct
5. both Peter and Michael come here quite often but neither of them gives us
help.

>> Correct

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