homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Creative Writing: (Answer in not more than 5 sentences ^-^)
If I could make something disappear in my life, what would it be and why?
I want to disapper study. Because study is big stress for student .
강사 첨삭
Good afternoon, [이름]! ^_- Happy Tuesday!
Although you would want studying to disappear, I hope you\'re aware of its relevance in your life. :)
Thank you so much for doing your homework.
However, your answer\'s too short. Try to expound your answer next time.^^
_T. Mayleen :)
I want to disapper study.
>> If I could make something disappear in my life, it would be studying.
Because study is big stress for student .
>> It is because it\'s a gives a lot of stress to students.
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