homework

Hi kiddo,

Thanks for making your homeworks.

I\'ve made some changes and added  a few supporting sentences to

solidify your answers.

If you have any questions or clarifications about the changes, please

don\'t be shy to ask me tomorrow. :)

See you!

Good night!

T. Amanda:)

Friday\'s homework
** If you could invent any machine, what type of machine would you invent and why?
I want to invent a flying car.

Correct

If I make it, people can move any place with more comfortable feelings. 

>> Inventing a flying car would allow people to move from one place to another conveniently. We already have airplanes, jet panes and the likes, however a flying car would be smaller and it could fly at a low level altitude. It would held solve the traffic problems in most urban towns and cities in the world.

 Today\'s homework
** What work or job would you like to have in the future? Why?
I want to be an inventer.

>> I want to be an inventor.
 Because I like to make new and great things which the world does not have.

>> Being an inventor would give me the opportunity to make great new things which the world does not have.