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2017-08-22 · 첨삭 강사 May

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I will be angry if the waiter pad the bill when I enjoy dinner with my team members in a Korean restaurant. We sometimes go to Korean restaurant and order samgyeopsal and soju. We focused on conversation so sometimes we forgot how many samgyeopsal we ate. This is a good chance to pad the bill. At this time if we ate 20 people as samgyeopsal but there are 25 people as samgyeopsl in the bill. Nowadays that kind of Korean restaurant is rare but until now a few restaurant do like that kind of action. So when we go there, we choose the person who don't drink an alcohol and ask him to count how many samgyeopsal we ate and how many soju we drank. If the sum both counting we do and bill from waiter is different, we fix it and complain about the bill. And then we will boycott that restaurant and share that information with my colleague. Anyway padding the bill is criminal so I hope that the restaurant keep in mind.

강사 첨삭

Good day! How are you, James?

You must still be reviewing your budget for next year.

Chill! Later, you can have dinner with your colleagues. You just need to make sure that you will not go to a restaurant that pads the bill. Oh my, that would push your buttons.

Thanks for sharing, James! You sure are a fun guy to be with.

Until our next chat!

-Klein-

I will be angry if the waiter pad the bill when I enjoy dinner with my team members in a Korean restaurant.

>>Correct
 We sometimes go to Korean restaurant and order samgyeopsal and soju.

>>We sometimes go to a Korean restaurant and order samgyeopsal and soju.
 We focused on conversation so sometimes we forgot how many samgyeopsal we ate.
 
>>We focused on the conversation, so some time, we forgot how much samgyeopsal we ate.

This is a good chance to pad the bill.
 
>>Correct

At this time if we ate 20 people as samgyeopsal but there are 25 people as samgyeopsl in the bill.
 
>>At this time, if we ate samgyeopsal for 20 people, there is samgyeopsal for 25 people in the bill.

Nowadays that kind of Korean restaurant is rare but until now a few restaurant do like that kind of action.
 
>>Nowadays, that kind of Korean restaurant is rare but until now, a few restaurants do like that kind of action.

So when we go there, we choose the person who don\'t drink an alcohol and ask him to count how many samgyeopsal we ate and how many soju we drank.
 
>>So when we go there, we choose the person who doesn\'t drink alcohol and ask him to count how much samgyeopsal we ate and how much soju we drank.

If the sum both counting we do and bill from waiter is different, we fix it and complain about the bill.
 
>>If the sum of the count and the bill from the waiter are different, we fix it and complain about the bill.

And then we will boycott that restaurant and share that information with my colleague.
>>Correct
Anyway padding the bill is criminal so I hope that the restaurant keep in mind.

>>Anyway, padding the bill is a crime, so I hope that restaurant owners keep that in mind.

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