Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
It\'s a cold and rainy Tuesday in my country.
We are currently having a typhoon and it\'s scaring the hell out of me. kkk.
How\'s your day so far?
Thanks for taking the time to write on our composition board.
Sometimes we have to say white lies in order to avoid hurting the feelings of other people, especially when we know that they\'re emotionally sensitive or may be going through difficult situations.
However, I also believe in the saying: \"The truth hurts but it would set you free\".
I honestly believe that, the truth serves as our eye opener.
It allows us to be conscious of our flaws or whatever it is that\'s lacking in us.
When you know the truth, you do your best to make the wrong things right.
Sometimes it\'s really difficult to be honest with other people, especially with the people we care about but there\'s only so much we could do for them.
I hope you are having a nice day.
See you again tomorrow. ^^
Take care always.
~Teacher Charry (^^,)
Honesty is a good trait but people don\'t have to reveal everything.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> Honesty is a great characteristic but people don\'t need to reveal everything.
I think that knowing what to say and what to hide is also an important trait.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> I think knowing what to divulge and knowing what to keep is an equally important trait.
Governments or military forces should keep something in secret to protect people.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> Governments or military forces need to keep something in secret to ensure the people\'s safety.
Keeping something in secret is required not only to governments but also to individuals.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> Keeping something in secret is necessary not only in governments but also among individuals.
I don\'t have to tell my friend that I got A score on test when my friend is being sad due to low grade.
>> I don\'t have to tell my friend that I got an A score on the test when my friend is being sad due to a low grade.
Maybe the tricky part is when people have to lie to hide secrets.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> The tricky part is probably when people have to lie to hide secrets.
Lying seems more worse than just not telling something.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> Lying is far worse than just keeping quiet.
However I personally think that there can be so called white lies.
>> However, I personally think that there can be so called white lies.
Honesty is an important value but sometimes other values take priority over honesty.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> Honesty is an important value but sometimes there are other values that are more important.
If even lying can be justified sometimes, then keeping secret is not always harmful.
>> If lying can be justified sometimes, then keeping a secret is not always harmful.
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