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Hi there, Ella!
Thanks for your composition today! I can\'t imagine myself being the only one person left in the world. If it felt like it, I would keep walking with the hope of finding someone.
T. JanE ^^
If i were a last person who is left on earth, i would go around everywhere.
>> If I were the last person left on Earth, I would go around everywhere.
It would be so lonely if i were alone in the world.
>> Correct
So i go round as much as i can.
>> So I would go around as much as I can.
looking around and experiencing many things will make me interested to live alone.
>> Correct
but i would get wounded or sick, i should take care by my self.
>> But if I get wounded or sick, I should take care of myself.
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