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2017-08-22 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

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If i were a last person who is left on earth, i would go around everywhere. It would be so lonely if i were alone in the world. So i go round as much as i can. looking around and experiencing many things will make me interested to live alone. but i would get wounded or sick, i should take care by my self.

강사 첨삭

Hi there, Ella!

Thanks for your composition today! I can\'t imagine myself being the only one person left in the world. If it felt like it, I would keep walking with the hope of finding someone.

T. JanE ^^

If i were a last person who is left on earth, i would go around everywhere.

>> If I were the last person left on Earth, I would go around everywhere. 

It would be so lonely if i were alone in the world.

>> Correct

So i go round as much as i can.

>> So I would go around as much as I can. 

looking around and experiencing many things will make me interested to live alone.

>> Correct

but i would get wounded or sick, i should take care by my self.

>> But if I get wounded or sick, I should take care of myself. 

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