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Hi [이름]! ^^
Good evening! :)
Thank you for sharing me this. :)
Well, it would be very interesting if you will be a rapper, right? :D
Who knows? You might become one? :D
As long as you set your heart on one thing and do something about it,
You will be able to reach it. :)
Teacher Glenda
Yesterday after i called with you i`ve rested in the afernoon but all of sudden owner calld me and asked to work as chef right now!
>> Yesterday, after our class, I rested in the afternoon but all of sudden the owner of the restaurant I am working called me to go to work.
because one chef who`s working in other branch didn`t show up without knowing the reason so i said to him \"yes i can work tonight don`t worry \" and then i worked for 5hours.
>> It was because the chef in the other branch didn\'t show up without prior notice. So, I said yes and went to work for 5 hours.
after working , i felt i chose well working today cuz it wasn`t busy and it was good to learn how to handle a knife and how to cut the ingrediants
>> After working, I felt that it was a good timing working today because it wasn\'t busy and it was good to learn how to handle knife and how to cut the ingredients.
If you will have to choose to become someone other than yourself, who would it be and why?
Theseday i watched a korean program called show me the money which is too many people come out on TV to show their rapping skils and the judge decide after listening their rapping skils The show has grown in popularity since the first season aired in 2012.
>> These days, I\'m watching a Korean program called \'Show me the money\' where many people show up on TV to showcase their rapping skills. The judges would then decides after listening to their rap. The show has grown in popularity since the first season aired in 2012.
while i was watching the show , i thought how can they speak so fast and what are they thinking as usual ??
>> While I was watching the show, I was thinking how can they speak what\'s in their mind in very fast way?
i was shocked that they do freestyle so i would think what if i rapper?
>> I was surprised that they can do freestyle, so I was thinking what if I will be a rapper?
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