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2017-08-23 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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Do other people in your country have more rights than you? I live good life in my country. So,I think get have rights other people. But, If poor class,don't have rights. ex)senior,disabled,young man unemployment,patient May be,When I become a socially weak,i will feel inequality of rights. I have not do my homework by way of various excuses these days.^^ Sorry

강사 첨삭

Hi, Ma\'am Sylvia!

Thank you for doing your homework. Please check my corrections.

Have a good day!

~Kelly^^

Do other people in your country have more rights than you?
I live good life in my country.

>> I live a good life in my country.
So,I think get have rights other people.

>> So, I think I enjoy my rights like other people.
But, If poor class,don\'t have rights.

>> But, poor people don\'t have rights.
ex)senior,disabled,young man unemployment,patient

>> example: seniors, disabled, young men, unemployed
May be,When I become a socially weak,i will feel inequality of rights.
>> Maybe, when I become socially weak, I will experience inequality also.
I have not do my homework by way of various excuses these days.^^ Sorry

>> I have not done my homework because of several reasons. Sorry.

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