Homework

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I think technology sometimes has a negative impact our societal values.

The most popular technological advancement that I could give which has this impact would be the computer and the internet.

Because of the internet, virtual communication has become easier but I also feel that face-to-face communication has lost its touch.

Rather than personally telling our loved ones how much we love them, we choose to just send them a message because it\'s more convenient.

I think this is sad.

Anyhow, this is just my point-of-view.

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Technological progress can make side effects on societal values.

>> Technological progress can have side effects on societal values.

Because some technologies create new criteria on previous social values.

>> Its\' because some technologies create a new criteria based on previous social values.

For example, thanks to progress in medical area, we can transplant organs and save dying people.

>> For example, thanks to the progress in the medical area, we can transplant organs and save dying people.

Since patients who need to get organ transplant are always more than donated organs, people created some criteria to decide the order.

>> Since patients who need to get an organ transplant are always more than the donated organs, people created some criteria to decide the order.

People usually agree with the statement saying every people\'s lives are equally precious.

>> People usually agree with the statement saying people\'s lives are equally precious.

However to decide who will get organ transparent surgery sooner than other patients, we need to evaluate lives\' values.

>> However, to decide who will get an organ transplant surgery sooner, we need to evaluate the lives\' values.

This is not the exact example of negative effects.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> It is not the definite example of negative effects.

The point is the point of view dealing with moral area can be changed due to technological progress.

>> The point is that, the point-of-view in dealing with moral values can be changed due to the technological progress.

Adapting new technological criteria on existed moral values makes negative effects sometimes because technology and morality often aim different goals.

>>  Adapting new technological criteria based on existing moral values makes negative effects sometimes because technology and morality often aim for different goals.