homework
학생이 쓴 원문
What is your opinion about actors or actresses who run for a position in politics?
In my opinion about it is more honest than another politicians
because he/she has lived in public for a long time ago
and he/she has fans in my own backyard
강사 첨삭
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Happy hump day!
It\'s good to hear your opinion about this topic.
Thank you so much for sharing your ideas.
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Teacher Sunday
In my opinion about it is more honest than another politicians
>> In my opinion about this is that actors and actresses are more honest that other politicians.
because he/she has lived in public for a long time ago
>> Because he/she has been serving the public for a long time.
and he/she has fans in my own backyard
>> And he/she has his/her fans by his/her side.
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