homework
학생이 쓴 원문
HOMEWORK:
Writing Exercise: What are the advantages of watching TV? What are the disadvantages of watching TV?
Watching TV makes me happy because I can see singer.
강사 첨삭
Happy Thursday, [이름]! ^_-)/
We as humans want to understand different situations and how in those situations other people respond to them.
Much like a dream, I think stories and TV help show alternative ways characters handle themselves and their popularity is based on the shows applicability. (Luke Anderson)
Thank you for answering your homework.^^
_T. Mayleen :)
Watching TV makes me happy because I can see singer.
>> Watching TV makes me happy because I can see my favorite singer/performer.
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