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2017-08-23 · 첨삭 강사 Amanda

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Which is a better present, a well-chosen gift or money? why? I think a well-chosen gift is better. Give it means they know what I want. And give money means they don’t know what I want.

강사 첨삭


Hi Kiddo,


How\'s your dinner?


Thank you for doing your homework. Your answer is uncommon for boys your age.

Most boys your age would say that they prefer to receive money over a  well-chosen gift because they can use it to buy what they like.

I like how you justified you answer. It makes a lot of sense and it\'s actually a wise and mature answer from someone so young.

I just added something to solidify your answer more.


Good night!


T. Amanda:)



Which is a better present, a well-chosen gift or money? why?


I think a well-chosen gift is better.

Correct
Give it means they know what I want. And give money means they don’t know what I want.

>>Giving me a gift which they have chosen themselves means that they know what I want. While giving me money means that they don\'t know what I want.

I really appreciate people who know me enough to know what I want, that\'s why I like receiving a well-chosen gift more over receiving money.

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