homework
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강사 첨삭
Hi Kiddo,
How\'s your dinner?
Thank you for doing your homework. Your answer is uncommon for boys your age.
Most boys your age would say that they prefer to receive money over a well-chosen gift because they can use it to buy what they like.
I like how you justified you answer. It makes a lot of sense and it\'s actually a wise and mature answer from someone so young.
I just added something to solidify your answer more.
Good night!
T. Amanda:)
Which is a better present, a well-chosen gift or money? why?
I think a well-chosen gift is better.
Correct
Give it means they know what I want. And give money means they don’t know what I want.
>>Giving me a gift which they have chosen themselves means that they know what I want. While giving me money means that they don\'t know what I want.
I really appreciate people who know me enough to know what I want, that\'s why I like receiving a well-chosen gift more over receiving money.
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