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2017-08-24 · 첨삭 강사 Rose

학생이 쓴 원문

When do you feel you are over a barrel? What do you do when you feel that way? ==> Nowadays I feel that I am over a barrel when I was in the company. There are many meetings in a day but there is no one that I am host. Because of many meetings I cannot do my work in time. So I have to work after dinner in the company. After dinner, I check my e-mail and I approve some document from my team members. As a result, I am always tired and I come home late. But it is real life in Korea. So, I told my daughter that Daddy is so busy nowadays, i will come back home late. There is no solution because of my position in my company. Because of that, I like that sentence as I said. Enjoy it if you can't avoid it. It will be a good solution to solve my problem.

강사 첨삭

You are awesome, James! Look at the sentences below! I\'ve marked most of them \"Correct\". That\'s a good sign!

I know that you are even busy these days, but you still find time for this activity. I appreciate all your efforts, my friend.

I hope you\'ll reap all the fruits of your hard work soon.

I will do my best to help you! I got some order from your daughter, so I better keep my acts together.

Thank you very much!

-Klein-

When do you feel you are over a barrel?
What do you do when you feel that way?
 ==>
 Nowadays I feel that I am over a barrel when I was in the company.

>>Nowadays, I feel that I am over a barrel when I am in the company.
 There are many meetings in a day but there is no one that I am host.

>>There are many meetings in a day but there is no one who can host it than me.
 Because of many meetings I cannot do my work in time.
 
>>Correct

So I have to work after dinner in the company.
 
>>Correct

After dinner, I check my e-mail and I approve some document from my team members.
 
>>Correct

As a result, I am always tired and I come home late.
 
>>Correct

But it is real life in Korea.
 
>>Correct

So, I told my daughter that Daddy is so busy nowadays, i will come back home late.
 
>>Correct [capitalization: I)

There is no solution because of my position in my company.
>>Correct
 Because of that, I like that sentence as I said.

>>Correct
 Enjoy it if you can\'t avoid it.
 
>>Correct

It will be a good solution to solve my problem.

>>Correct

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