Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
You are awesome, James! Look at the sentences below! I\'ve marked most of them \"Correct\". That\'s a good sign!
I know that you are even busy these days, but you still find time for this activity. I appreciate all your efforts, my friend.
I hope you\'ll reap all the fruits of your hard work soon.
I will do my best to help you! I got some order from your daughter, so I better keep my acts together.
Thank you very much!
-Klein-
When do you feel you are over a barrel?
What do you do when you feel that way?
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Nowadays I feel that I am over a barrel when I was in the company.
>>Nowadays, I feel that I am over a barrel when I am in the company.
There are many meetings in a day but there is no one that I am host.
>>There are many meetings in a day but there is no one who can host it than me.
Because of many meetings I cannot do my work in time.
>>Correct
So I have to work after dinner in the company.
>>Correct
After dinner, I check my e-mail and I approve some document from my team members.
>>Correct
As a result, I am always tired and I come home late.
>>Correct
But it is real life in Korea.
>>Correct
So, I told my daughter that Daddy is so busy nowadays, i will come back home late.
>>Correct [capitalization: I)
There is no solution because of my position in my company.
>>Correct
Because of that, I like that sentence as I said.
>>Correct
Enjoy it if you can\'t avoid it.
>>Correct
It will be a good solution to solve my problem.
>>Correct
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