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korea has a good health care system
>> In my opinion, I believe that Korea has a good health care system.
The whole citizen have been paing low medical expenses by health insuranse
>> Every citizen who has a health insurance is paying moderate medical expenses.
Few countries have taken care of health insuranse in the world
>> Only few countries around the world consider the benefits of a health insurance.
so many people of many contries visit to do korea because korea is paid low medical expenses and high quality medical service
>> That is why a lot of foreigners visit and do their medical procedures here, aside from paying low medical expenses they get a high quality service.
For example America is very high medical expenses so many American don\'t go hospital 
>> For example in America the medical expenses is too high that is why Americans don\'t go to the hospital.
But korea has weaknesses
>> But the health care system has also it\'s shortcoming
It is insufficient home care service
>> The home care service agency is insufficient.
Korean doctor just want many money
>> Korean doctors just want to secure more money.
so home care service that low paid money doesn\'t interesting

>> As a result a low paid home care services is not interesting.