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Hi [이름]!

You have a good source!^^  As for me, fishing is more likely a hobby or a fun activity for families. It\'s a very interesting way to spend your time than playing video games. Thank you and see you in our class!

~T. Eunice

The definition of sport in Google is an activity involving physical exertion and skill in which an individual or team competes against another or others for entertainment.
>> Correct!
In brief, sport needs physical force and competition.
>> In brief, sport needs a physical force and a competition.
So Fishing can be sport depending on the situations.
>> So Fishing can be a sport depending on the situations.
Even though people use whole body when they are fishing, but if there is just only one person, it can’t be a sport.
>> Even though people use their whole body when they are fishing but if there is just only one person, it can’t be a sport.
Or
>> Even though a person uses his body in fishing but if he is alone, it can\'t be considered as a sport but more likely a task.
But there is a competition of who would be a champion for fishing, it will be a sport.
>> If there is a competition of who would be the champion for fishing then it will be considered as a kind of sport.
However about video game tournaments, I don’t think it is not a sport.
>> However, about video game tournaments, I don’t think it is not a sport. 
Most of video games are made to experience a virtual world.
>> Most video games are made to experience a virtual world.
It’s not the real world where we make physical power to win the game.
>> It’s not the real world where we exert our physical energy to win the game.