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If you could change one thing about yourself, what would it be?
Why?
I can change mental attitude.
I can change my negative mind to positive mind.
negative mind make irritation,fear,gloomy.
I get have positive mind.
강사 첨삭
Good morning Ma\'am Sylvia!
Thank you for being honest in answering this question. Stay positive all the time.^^
~Kelly^^
If you could change one thing about yourself, what would it be?
Why?
I can change mental attitude.
>> I want to change my mental attitude.
I can change my negative mind to positive mind.
>> I can change my negative mind into a positive one.
negative mind make irritation,fear,gloomy.
>> A negative mind can cause irritation, fear and depression.
I get have positive mind.
>> I want to become optimistic.
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