homework
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* Do you give money to beggars or homeless people? Why or why not?
I will give money to them. They look poor. When I give money to them, I feel happy that I do something good for them.
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* Do you give money to beggars or homeless people? Why or why not?
I will give money to them.
Correct
Or
I will give them money.
They look poor.
Correct.
When I give money to them, I feel happy that I do something good for them.
>>Giving homeless people money would make me feel happy because I did something good for them.
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