Homework

Hello, [이름]! :)   

How\'s your Friday going? ^^

I hope you\'re doing great.

Thank you for writing this beautiful essay.

I personally think that experience is a great teacher but I also think that you don\'t have to personally experience something to learn.

One can learn from others\' experiences.

Experience is great because you get to separate the good from the bad ones.

At the end of the day, you learn the things that you should and should not be doing.

Anyhow, this is just how I see it.

I hope you\'re doing great.

See you again next week.

Take care.

~Teacher Charry :)

Learning occurs even when we don\'t experience difficulties.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> We can learn even if we don\'t experience difficulties.

The question precisely used a word \'true\' to modify learning so I should define what true learning is first.

>> The question precisely used the word \'true\' to modify learning so I should define what true learning is first.

I want to say that when people learn something truly, the lesson from the learning is not forgotten easily.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> I want to point out that when people truly learn something, the lesson from the learning is not easily forgotten.

For example, I once used the expression \'it feels like I will get a cancer because this is too stressful\' before.

>> For example, I once used the expression, \'it feels like I will get a cancer because this is too stressful\', before.

Young people use the expression \'getting a cancer\' when they want to express something is really stressful.

>> Young people use the expression, \'getting a cancer\', when they want to express something that is really stressful.

I knew that expression is not that good but I always forgot that I shouldn\'t use the expression.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> I know that expression is not good but I always forget that I shouldn\'t be using that expression.

One day I used the expression as usual but someone said her mother actually has a cancer and the expression is hurtful.

>> One day, I used the expression as usual but someone said her mother actually has (a) cancer and the expression was hurtful.

I felt so sorry to her and I never used the expression again because I didn\'t want to hurt someone\'s feeling.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> I felt so sorry for her and I never used the expression again because I didn\'t want to hurt someone\'s feeling.

People can learn and remember something more easily when they face difficulties.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> People are able to learn and remember something more easily when they experience difficulties.

Maybe that\'s why people say that difficulties are required to get true learning.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> Maybe that\'s why people say that difficulties are required to acquire true learning.