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2017-08-25 · 첨삭 강사 Glenda

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i`m still angry about the cafe i hired for 2days ! i don`t understand why do they post on the job site ?? from the beginning, they shouldn`t have posted on the job site. anyway i don`t care past is just past I`ll forget about it and think what i have to do from now My mom says you have to see your life in the long term and just think lightly but make a decision as much as you can 1. The design stage typically lasts for two months. 2. We'll let you know about our decision until tomorrow. 3. I like working with Bill. He's really laid-back.; 4. The design process in this product is fairly complicated. 5. Please inform me of your decision. 6. This is an issue that came up with the early stages of the project. 7. The demand for our product has risen by 50% over the last two years. 8. John will be in charge for all the technical aspects. 9. Are you working with the project that I assigned you to? 10. I work at downtown Chicago/ I work in the center (=central part) of

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! ^^

Good evening! ^^


I always admire your positivity. no matter how disappointing the situation is,

you always get to see the silver lining. :)

That is really good. It will be a very good advantage in life being as optimistic as you. :)


Thank you for going over this composition. 

I hope you will enjoy your weekend. :)

Have a blast this weekend. :)

See you!


Teacher Glenda



i`m still angry about the cafe i hired for 2days ! i don`t understand why do they post on the job site ?? from the beginning, they shouldn`t have posted on the job site. anyway i don`t care past is just past 

>> I\'m still angry of the café I was hired for tow days ago. I don\'t why do they have to post the vacancy on the job site, they shouldn\'t have posted it if that\'s the case. Anyway, I don\'t care anymore, past is past.
 I`ll forget about it and think what i have to do from now 

>> Correct
My mom says you have to see your life in the long term and just think lightly but make a decision as much as you can 

>> My mom said that you have to see your life in a long term way and just think lightly but make a decision as much as you can.

 1. The design stage typically lasts for two months.
>> Correct
2. We\'ll let you know about our decision until tomorrow.
>> by>> We\'ll let you know about our decision by tomorrow.
3. I like working with Bill. He\'s really laid-back.;
>>
Correct
4. The design process in this product is fairly complicated.
>> for >> The design process for this product is fairly complicated.
5. Please inform me of your decision.
>>
Correct
6. This is an issue that came up with the early stages of the project.
>> during >> This is an issue that came up during the early stages of the project.
7. The demand for our product has risen by 50% over the last two years.
>>
Correct
8. John will be in charge for all the technical aspects.
>> Correct
9. Are you working with the project that I assigned you to?
>> on >>
Are you working on the project that I assigned you to?
10. I work at downtown Chicago/ I work in the center (=central part) of

>> Correct

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