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Hi [이름]! ^^
Good evening! ^^
I always admire your positivity. no matter how disappointing the situation is,
you always get to see the silver lining. :)
That is really good. It will be a very good advantage in life being as optimistic as you. :)
Thank you for going over this composition.
I hope you will enjoy your weekend. :)
Have a blast this weekend. :)
See you!
Teacher Glenda
i`m still angry about the cafe i hired for 2days ! i don`t understand why do they post on the job site ?? from the beginning, they shouldn`t have posted on the job site. anyway i don`t care past is just past
>> I\'m still angry of the café I was hired for tow days ago. I don\'t why do they have to post the vacancy on the job site, they shouldn\'t have posted it if that\'s the case. Anyway, I don\'t care anymore, past is past.
I`ll forget about it and think what i have to do from now
>> Correct
My mom says you have to see your life in the long term and just think lightly but make a decision as much as you can
>> My mom said that you have to see your life in a long term way and just think lightly but make a decision as much as you can.
1. The design stage typically lasts for two months.
>> Correct
2. We\'ll let you know about our decision until tomorrow.
>> by>> We\'ll let you know about our decision by tomorrow.
3. I like working with Bill. He\'s really laid-back.;
>> Correct
4. The design process in this product is fairly complicated.
>> for >> The design process for this product is fairly complicated.
5. Please inform me of your decision.
>> Correct
6. This is an issue that came up with the early stages of the project.
>> during >> This is an issue that came up during the early stages of the project.
7. The demand for our product has risen by 50% over the last two years.
>> Correct
8. John will be in charge for all the technical aspects.
>> Correct
9. Are you working with the project that I assigned you to?
>> on >> Are you working on the project that I assigned you to?
10. I work at downtown Chicago/ I work in the center (=central part) of
>> Correct
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