homework.
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Hi there, Ella!
Thanks for your composition today! I think it\'s really difficult to imagine ourselves without sleep. Our life would really be incomplete.^^
T. JanE ^^
I can\'t dream about that i don\'t need to sleep.
>> I can\'t imagine myself without sleep.
I love to sleep so much.
>> Correct
But If i didn\'t need to sleep, I would have been doing something continuously.
>> But if I didn\'t need to sleep, I would be doing something continually.
My exercise time would be prolonged twice as much as I do usually.
>> Correct
The number of having a meal would be added more than before.
>> Correct
And i would need around half of sleeping time not to do anything to rest.
>> Correct
But still there would be quite much time left.
>> Correct
There are so many things to do but I want to sleep that time.
>> Correct
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