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2017-08-25 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

학생이 쓴 원문

I can't dream about that i don't need to sleep. I love to sleep so much. But If i didn't need to sleep, I would have been doing something continuously. my exercise time would be prolonged twice as much as i do usually. The number of having a meal would be added more than before. And i would need around half of sleeping time not to do anytning to rest. But still there would be quite much time left. there are so many things to do but i want to sleep that time.

강사 첨삭

Hi there, Ella!

Thanks for your composition today! I think it\'s really difficult to imagine ourselves without sleep. Our life would really be incomplete.^^

T. JanE ^^

I can\'t dream about that i don\'t need to sleep.

>> I can\'t imagine myself without sleep. 

I love to sleep so much.

>> Correct

But If i didn\'t need to sleep, I would have been doing something continuously.

>> But if I didn\'t need to sleep, I would be doing something continually. 

My exercise time would be prolonged twice as much as I do usually.

>> Correct

The number of having a meal would be added more than before.

>> Correct

And i would need around half of sleeping time not to do anything to rest.

>> Correct

But still there would be quite much time left.

>> Correct

There are so many things to do but I want to sleep that time.

>> Correct

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