homework
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HOMEWORK:
Writing Exercise: What images spring to mind when you hear the word 'war'?
Answer in not more than 5 sentences.^_-
Hmm.. if i hear 'war', i am so angry and sad. because 'war' is kill a lot of people.
강사 첨삭
Good evening, [이름]! ^_-)/
Happy Friday!
War produces chaos, but in other eras, particularly for great powers, it has also meant influence or dominance and created the basis for reshaping or controlling whole regions.
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Hmm.. if i hear \'war\', i am so angry and sad.
>> Hearing the word war makes me sad and angry.
because \'war\' is kill a lot of people.
>> It\'s because in war, a lot of people die.
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