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2017-08-29 · 첨삭 강사 Glenda

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Hi how was your weekend? did the storm pass? or it`s still crying? I hope everything is allright ! today i ate all different kind of meats i like the reason why i ate them is that because i went to BBQ restaurant buffet. i don`t say anything other then they`re awesome. i couldn`t stop eating that it`s freaking delicious. i ate a lot of meats then i paid. 1 According to John, Mary was late. I believe John. 2. Anthony is ahead of Rachel in the race. I think he’ll win 3.As for Matt, he will arrive later. 4.As to your behaviour, I think you were wrong. 5.Contrary to expectations, the euro fell in value. 6.Do you want some pork along with the chicken? 7. Don’t worry apart from me. Think about yourself 8.Everyone came, save for Lek who had to work. 9.Everyone was present, except for Mary. She stayed at home. 10.Futher to your letter, I have spoken to Mr. [Name].

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! ^^

Great evening!


Wow I envy you. :)

I hope we could a place like that here.

Where I can eat meat as much as you have eaten. :D

Anyway, thank you for sharing this.


Teacher Glenda


Hi how was your weekend? did the storm pass? or it`s still crying? 

>> Correct :)
 I hope everything is all right !

>> Correct

today i ate all different kind of meats i like the reason why i ate them is that because i went to BBQ restaurant buffet. i don`t say anything other then they`re awesome.

>> Today I ate different kinds of meat. I went to a buffet BBQ restaurant. I can\'t say7 anything aside from they\'re awesome.

i couldn`t stop eating that it`s freaking delicious. i ate a lot of meats then i paid.
>> I couldn\'t sop eating because it was freaking delicious. So I ate a lot and paid.
1 According to John, Mary was late. I believe John.
>> Correct
2. Anthony is ahead of Rachel in the race. I think he’ll win
>> Correct
3.As for Matt, he will arrive later.
>> Correct
4.As to your behaviour, I think you were wrong.
>> As per
5.Contrary to expectations, the euro fell in value.
>> Correct
6.Do you want some pork along with the chicken?
>> Correct
7. Don’t worry apart from me. Think about yourself
>> Correct
8.Everyone came, save for Lek who had to work.
>> as for
9.Everyone was present, except for Mary. She stayed at home.
>> Correct
10.Futher to your letter, I have spoken to Mr. [Name].

>> Correct

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