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2017-08-28 · 첨삭 강사 May

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Tell me about a time when you received good service from a hotel or a restaurant. Give specific details about it. There is my favorate restuarnat in Busan. I like the restuarant becasue the food is very well cooked and the plating is good. The staff are also kind and more over I can feel they are reall care about the quality of food and plating.

강사 첨삭

Thank you for sharing about your favorite restaurant Ms. [Name]!

You have to know more about using the word \"moreover\" in your sentences.

\"Moreover\" is used for introducing an additional and important fact that

supports or emphasizes what you have just said. Do not put \"moreover\"

if you have already used \"and\". Generally, you You expressed your opinions well.

--Teacher Marie

There is my favorate restuarnat in Busan.

>> I have a favorite restaurant in Busan.
I like the restuarant becasue the food is very well cooked and the plating is good.

>> CORRECT GRAMMAR

OR >> I like the restaurant BECAUSE the food is very WELL-COOKED and the plating is good. (SPELLING AND PUNCTUATION)
The staff are also kind and more over I can feel they are reall care about the quality of food and plating.

>> The staff are also kind and I can feel that they really care about the quality of food and plating.

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