Homework

2017-08-28 · 첨삭 강사 May

학생이 쓴 원문

Answer the question in 3 to 5 sentences. This will be a part of our topic tomorrow. What is your favorite day? Why? My favorite day is of course Friday. I can work easily because I get use to the work for 5 days. More over I can enjoy the work with the expectation of taking rest on the weekend.

강사 첨삭

Hello Ms. [Name]!

Thank you very much for your time answering your homeworks.

How was it? Hehe.. You are patient and eager to learn new things.

Many people like and enjoy Friday. It\'s already in their mind the meaning

of Friday, and if it\'s Friday, of course, you expect rest days to come.

--Teacher May

My favorite day is of course Friday.

>> CORRECT GRAMMAR

OR >> My favorite day is, of course, Friday. (PUNCTUATION)
I can work easily because I get use to the work for 5 days.

>> I can work easily every Friday because I get used to work for 4 days.
More over I can enjoy the work with the expectation of taking rest on the weekend.

>>Moreover, I enjoy working with the expectation of taking a rest on the weekend.

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