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Exactly until high school education subject isn\'t to be change
>> In my opinion, I think the curriculum until high school shouldn\'t be change.
because education subject is collected that most likely used be in real life
>> Because the subjects are helpful in real life situation.
but in my opinion university major will many change
>> But in my conclusion the courses in the university should be change.
In my pinion a new major is drone
>> In my opinion I believe they should have a new course about this new technology called drone.
Already drone is being used filming, parcel service, people rescuse, farm management and so on
>> Drone is already being use in make a film, parcel services, rescuing people, farm management and so on.
and dron price is very expensive so many another company will atend dron market for more low expensed
>> And it cost an arm and a leg, as a result many other companies are competing for a lower cost.
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