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You have left me speechless again, James!
Thank you for showing how we should act to avoid conflicts. You are awesome!
This is just one of the best things I could say about you. I am so glad that I got to know you. I truly learn a lot from you every single time we talk. I hope you learn something from me, too.
And so, I have provided some ways on how you could say almost the same thing below. I hope you\'ll find them useful.
Until our next chat, James!
Regards to your family!
-Klein-
In which occasion would you put your foot down?
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Sometimes I want to take a rest on weekend.
>>Sometimes, I want to take a rest on weekends.
At that time I go to bed and I take a nap.
>>Correct
It is only thing that I get rid of stress.
>>It is the only thing that gets rid of my stress.
When I sleep on the bed, my wife wake me up and ask me to clean the room.
>>When I sleep on the bed, my wife wakes me up and asks me to clean the room.
It is terrible thing because I need time to break.
>>It is a terrible thing, because I need time for break.
At that time I put my foot down, and I try to keep my nap.
>>At that time, I put my foot down, but try to continue napping.
As I am older and older, I have to take care of myself for my family.
>>As I get older and older, I have to take care of myself for my family.
Taking nap is very helpful to me for maintaining my stamina.
>>Taking a nap is very helpful for me to maintain my stamina.
After I get a break or take a nap, I have to clean the room for my family\'s happiness.
>>After taking a break or a nap, I have to clean the room for my family\'s happiness.
If I do not it, there will be occurred many bad things.
>>If I do not do it, many bad things will occur.
Maybe my wife will revenge to me about my break on weekend.
>>Maybe my wife will take her revenge on me about my break on weekends.
Anyway I am enjoying my weekend with my family very happily.
>>Correct
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