Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
You are one amazing lad!
I just finished checking your composition but here\'s another one. I truly cannot keep up with you, James. You are so quick! I am so happy!
Thank you for completing my day. You have shared so much with me. I hope whatever I share with you are not too useless.
Here, you got so many \"correct\" marks! Incredible!
As for the corrections, look at them closely. If you got questions, please let me know anytime you\'re ready.
We\'ll see to it that it\'s be clearer to you.
Thank you very much!
Until tomorrow!
-Klein-
How do you pinch pennies?
How does it work for you?
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In my case, I try not to spend time useless.
>>In my case, I try not to waste time.
>>In my case, I try not to spend time uselessly.
As you know, I wake up early in the morning and I study with you.
>>Correct!
And I go to the company.
>>Correct!
Maybe I arrive at 7:00 AM before at the company.
>>Maybe I arrive before 7:00 AM at the company.
I start my work earlier than another colleague.
>>Correct
OR >> I start my work earlier than my other colleagues.
I check my e-mail and some reports.
>>Correct
After work, I also try to go to the gym for my health.
>>Correct
Because of that, I come back home late.
>>Correct
I think I am busy because I have many things to do.
>>Correct
If I do not spend my time pinching pennies, I cannot do studying, exercising.
>>Correct
So, I always tired but I think that the result of my effort, my life will be better than before.
>>So, I am always tired, but I think that the result of my effort is a life better than before.
Anyway it is very difficult to me pinch pennies.
>>Anyway, it is very difficult for me to pinch pennies.
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