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Some countries introduced a new law deciding how many hours employers can ask their employees to work.

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 The reason why they implemented this law is that all people have a right to live like a person.

>> The reason why they implemented this law is that all people should have the right to live like a person.

If they are not guaranteed working hours, they might live a life such as slaves or animals.

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And I think that the law is a very positive decision.

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 First, the society can be stable because working over time occurs someone\'s suicide.

>> First, the society can be stable because working overtime results to someone\'s suicide.

For example, in japan, a woman died by herself because of stress.

>>For example, in Japan, a woman killed herself because of stress.

She worked a lot of time for a long time in company.

>>She worked long hours for a long time in her company.
 Next, working efficiency can be increased.

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 Proper working hours can realize employees to take a rest, travel and spend time with family or freinds.

>> Proper working hours can enable employees to take a rest, travel and spend time with family or friends.

After that, they might work harder and happily.

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 Finally, market economy can be revived because after getting off the work, people can spend their money buying something such as food, clothes etc.

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 In conclusion, I think that law is a very good idea for employers and employees all around.

>>  In conclusion, I think that law is a very good idea for both employers and employees.