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2017-08-29 · 첨삭 강사 Charry

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I don't think customers are always right. Actually this statement has caused a kind of social problem here in Korea. Customers are human and they can be also rude or unreasonable. However the idea that customers are always right would prevent employees from defending themselves from crazy customers. The statement also can make customers think that they have every rights to act freely. Therefore the customers would easily raise their voices and don't mind their tone. Customers also should show good manners to employees because being polite to other people is a basic politeness. Being a customer can't be a kind of power or privilege but the statement sometimes make people are deluded. I personally think employers also care about their employees' feeling and rights not only customers' happiness. The statement is not helpful at all to improve employees' rights on customers.

강사 첨삭

Hello there [이름]! ^_^

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Thank you very much for writing this awesome essay.

Please continue doing what you do. My only advice is, be careful with your punctuations because they can change the meaning of a sentence.

I think customers and employees both have rights.

Both customers and employees should treat each other with mutual respect.

Anyhow, that\'s just how I see it.

I hope you\'re doing great.

See you again tomorrow.

~Teacher Charry :)

I don\'t think customers are always right.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> I think customers are not always right.

Actually this statement has caused a kind of social problem here in Korea.

>> Actually, this statement has caused a kind of social problem here in Korea.

Customers are human and they can be also rude or unreasonable.

>> Customers are humans and they can also  be rude or unreasonable.

However the idea that customers are always right would prevent employees from defending themselves from crazy customers.

>> However, the idea that customers are always right would prevent employees from defending themselves from crazy customers.

The statement also can make customers think that they have every rights to act freely.

>> The statement also can make customers think that they have every right to act freely.

Therefore the customers would easily raise their voices and don\'t mind their tone.

>> Therefore, the customers would easily raise their voices and don\'t mind their tone.

Customers also should show good manners to employees because being polite to other people is a basic politeness.

>> Customers also should show good manners to employees because being polite to other people is a basic law of etiquette.

Being a customer can\'t be a kind of power or privilege but the statement sometimes make people are deluded.

>> Being a customer can\'t be a kind of power or privilege but the statement sometimes make people deluded.

I personally think employers also care about their employees\' feeling and rights not only customers\' happiness.

>> I personally think employers also care about their employees\' feeling and rights and not only about the customers\' happiness.

The statement is not helpful at all to improve employees\' rights on customers.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> The statement is not helpful at all to improve employees\' rights with the customers.

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