homework

2017-08-29 · 첨삭 강사 Amanda

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Friday's homework * Do you think it's disrespectful to argue with your elders? Please explain your answer. I do not think it is disrespectful to argue with elders. If I argue with them on some issues, I can learn their speaking skills. My speaking skills will be better.

강사 첨삭


Hello Kiddo,


Good afternoon!


Thanks for doing your homework.

I\'ve given you a rather sensitive question, but you were successful in justifying your answer. Good Job!


See you tonight!



T. Amanda:)


* Do you think it\'s disrespectful to argue with your elders? Please explain your answer.

I do not think it is disrespectful to argue with elders.
If I argue with them on some issues, I can learn their speaking skills.
My speaking skills will be better.


OR


I do not think it is disrespectful to argue with elders. Compared to many young people, many elders are full of wisdom.

If I argue with them, they can enlighten me about certain issues which are not clear to me.

I can also learn from their debating and speaking skills which could make mine better.


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