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It is so ironic when people complain of being too fat, when some people cannot even eat well TT

I hope food and charity can be distributed well, people could have access to it.

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 These days many people give a donation to poor people.

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Also I think charity is very important and good things. 

>>Also I think charity is a very important and a good thing. 

 There are a lot of people who has to be helped with money.

>> There are a lot of people who have to be helped with money.

For example, they are usually old age people, single mothers, africa babies, orphans etc.

>>For example, they are usually old-aged people, single mothers, African babies, orphans etc.
 The ways to help them with money are various. 

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 First, we can give them money or stuff in person such as food, clothes, something necessary what they want.

>> First, we can give them money or stuff in person such as food, clothes, or something necessary that they want.

 For example, for single mom, baby milks, diapers are always necessary.

>>For example, for single moms, milk and diapers are always necessary.

But they are quite expensive so, it can help them efficiently.

>>But they are quite expensive, so giving them can help them efficiently.
 Second, we can donate a little money every month to foundations.

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In our society, there are a lot of foundations.

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I have sent some money to \'world vision\' for three years.

>>I have been sending some money to \'World Vision\' for three years.
 Next, many poor old men or women don\'t eat fully.

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Some poeple eat just once a day, even that is a slice of bread or ramen.

>>Some people eat just once a day, even if that is only a slice of bread or ramen.

 So we can help them through \'rice car of love\'.

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It is to serverice, soup, side dishes free.

>>It is done to serve rice, soup, and side dishes for free.
 I hope that many people would like to help the poor.

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