Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! ^^
Good afternoon! ^^
It was really good to hear from you after the weekend. :)
We\'ll it seems that you are having a good time at work
even if it gets busy sometimes. :D
Keep up that kind of attitude. :)
Teacher Glenda
Hello ~ happy monday ! Semtember is just around the corner!
>> Correct <Monday should be in a capital letter.>
Today it was so busier than i thought nomarlly it`s not busy on monday
>> Today was busier than I thought because it\'s not normally busy on Mondays.
But even if it`s monday , there were so many customers who came to our restaurant and when we were about to close the kichen , big squad was coming.
>> But even if it`s monday , there were so many customers who came to our restaurant and when we were about to close the kichen , big squad came.
At that moment, we got frozen and then one of the chef told everyone
\"Everybody get off a boat , the war is not done yet haha\"
After 20minutes, i said \"eventually it`s time to go fising everyone take a boat again hahaha
>> Correct <Hahaha! I like this expression! :D>
Make a sentence or give an example situation using the following idioms:
1. Sore loser
2. Social butterfly
3. Band-aid on a bullet wound
1.All right! finally we won your team well didn`t you guys forget to buy
drinks and snacks if one of two teams lose
No way we didn`t know if there is any bet. we have to play again !!
Oh jesus ! what a sore loser
>> Correct
2.Social butterfly is very important in social life but that is not always the best
>> Correct
3.He need to put band-aid on a bullet wound
>> He needs to put Band-Aid on a bullet wound.
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