homework
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In my opinion, People can achieve success even they don’t aim to be perfect.
It because each person has different standard of success.
Also we can learn from fail. If people only aim to be perfect, they can easily lose what they really want to do and forget what they doing now. Of course , we need to be better person every single day but we need to be realize what we really want for don't lose way to success.
강사 첨삭
Hello there, [이름]!
Thank you very much for writing this essay.
I think there\'s nothing wrong with aiming to be perfect.
I think that\'s what separates winners from losers.
Winners are willing to make the sacrifice in order to achieve the best results.
Losers don\'t like to take on the difficult tasks because they hard to accomplish.
Anyhow, that\'s just my opinion. kkk.
See you again tomorrow.
Take care always.
~Teacher Charry :)In my opinion, People can achieve success even they don’t aim to be perfect.
>> In my opinion, people can achieve success even if they don’t aim to be perfect
It because each person has different standard of success.
>> It is because each person has a different standard for success.
Also we can learn from fail.
>> Also, we can learn from failures.
If people only aim to be perfect, they can easily lose what they really want to do and forget what they doing now.
>> If people only aim to be perfect, they can easily lose what they really want to do and forget what they are doing now.
Of course, we need to be better person every single day but we need to be realize what we really want for don\'t lose way to success.
>> Of course, we need to be a better person every single day but we need to realize what we really want for us not to lose our way to success.
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