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2017-08-30 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

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I don't feel i need to use my mobile phone alot, but it would be uncomfortable if i would not have a phone forever. i need to talk with my friends often and make an appointment with them. I should ask to my family what time you will come home and so on. It's the reason i'm still using a mobile phone. So i can give up my phone during limitied period or there are a lot of money more than $100.000.000 for compensating its utilities on me. * I'm sorry i can't understand what the meaning is, 'like a reverse mobile phone contract'

강사 첨삭

Hi there, Ella!

Thanks for your composition! I can\'t imagine myself without my mobile phone either. I think I would feel lost oftentimes because I depend much on my mobile phone for time, directions, etc.^^

T. JanE ^^

I don\'t feel I need to use my mobile phone a lot, but it would be uncomfortable if I would not have a phone forever.

>> Correct

I need to talk with my friends often and make an appointment with them.

>> Correct

I should ask to my family what time you will come home and so on.

>> I should ask my family what time they will come home.

It\'s the reason I\'m still using a mobile phone.

>> Correct

So i can give up my phone during limitied period or there are a lot of money more than $100.000.000 for compensating its utilities on me.

>> So I can give up my mobile phone for a limited period, or if they would offer me $100,000,000 to compensate for its utilities.

* I\'m sorry i can\'t understand what the meaning is, \'like a reverse mobile phone contract\'

>> I\'m sorry I can\'t understand the meaning of reverse mobile phone contract. 

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