homework

Hi [이름]!

Thank you so much for doing your homework and for sharing some information about you. I appreciate your interest in learning English. I hope I could help you improve your skills as you prepare for your future goal to work in Australia. Have fun in learning!^^ See you in class.

~Kelly^^

Good afternoon kelly :)

>> Good afternoon Kelly :)

I\'m your student [이름].

>> Correct.
let me introduce myself.

>> Let me introduce myself.

I\'m 28 years old and my job is a nurse. 

>> Correct.

OR:

>> I am 28 years old and I am a registered nurse here in Korea.
i want to be a nurse in Australia and that\'s why i started learning English.

>> I want to be a nurse in Australia, that\'s why I started learning English.

But my English grammar and writting skills is not so good. 

>> But, my English grammar and writing skills are not so good. 
but I\'ll try my best.

>> But, I\'ll try my best.
Thank you!!

>> Correct.