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2017-08-29 · 첨삭 강사 Charlie

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Face-to-face communication is better than other types of communication, such as letters, email, or telephone calls. Absolutely face to face communication is better than other types of communications. Communication is not only for giving a word but exchanging emotion. Face to face communication is the best way to deliver feelings and mood. You can express your intention with your action and face more efficiently.

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Thank you for answering yesterday\'s composition topic. ^^


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==Teacher Charlie==   



Face-to-face communication is better than other types of communication, such as letters, email, or telephone calls.

Absolutely face to face communication is better than other types of communications. Communication is not only for giving a word but exchanging emotion. Face to face communication is the best way to deliver feelings and mood. You can express your intention with your action and face more efficiently.

>>  I agree that face to face communication is better than other types of communication such as letters, emails, or telephone calls. I agree with this opinion because communication is not only an exchange of words but also an exchange of emotions. Face to face communication is the best way to convey feelings and moods because of facial expressions and gestures. 

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