homework

Good Evening Kiddo,

I like your answer.

I\'m sure it would be effective to some people, especially to music lovers.  

I made a few revisions on your grammar, but over all, you answered the question appropriately.

Sleep tight!

Teacher Amanda:)

What should someone do to be happy? Please explain your answer.

Dance to exciting music.

>>You can dance to an exciting music.

 It’s okay that you are not good at dance.

>>It’s okay that you are not good at dancing.

 Just do it for 30 minutes a day. Then your feeling will be better.

>>Just do it for 30 minutes a day, then you will feel better.

>>>OR:

Listening to music makes me feel good.

Dancing to the music makes me feel even better.

When I feel good, I am happy.

If someone wants to be happy, they should listen or dance to any music they like.

It doesn\'t matter if they\'re not good at dancing, they can just shake their body any way they want.

Dancing for at least 30 minutes everyday would make them feel better.

If they feel better, they will be happy.