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The positive aspect of future technology is
>> In my opinion the positive effect of technology in the future are the following.
first, future technolgy can extend life expectancy
>> First, the future technology can prolong the life expectancy.
second, it can grow up health
>> Second, it can boost our health better.
third, it can grow up life quality and so on
>> Third, it can make promote the quality of life and so on.
The negative aspect of future technology is the exhaustion of resources
>> On the other hand, the negative consequence of the technology in future is the exhaustion of the resources.
as a result every people must go out earth

>> As a result it will bring massive damage on earth.