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Hello there [이름]!

Thank you for doing your composition! I like reading it. Sometimes being a horrible person is just one of the labels for people who made mistakes but on a second thought, we should not let that label affect our lives. If there would be  a person who knows us well, that would be ourselves. You\'re doing great! Keep it up!

See you^^

~T. Eunice

For me, I will choose second thought. That’s because if the general public is proud of me, my parents would understand me later.
>>[Do you mean?] On a second thought, I would rather be respected by the general public and be proud of me because I know my parents would understand me in the long run.
You can make a definition of ‘a horrible person’ in many ways.
>> Correct!
In this essay, the meaning of those words is the person who lives their life abnormally and weirdly without harming anyone.
>> Correct!
Next, let’s assume I am that kind of a horrible person who is respected by people. but my parents are definitely worried about my life because they are conservative and have lived with their old belief.
>> Next, let’s assume that I am a horrible person who is respected by people but my parents are definitely worried about my life because they are conservative and have lived with their old beliefs.
However If I try to persuade them by showing the evidence about who I am, finally they understand me. because they love me.
>> However, if I try to persuade them by showing the evidence about who I am, finally they would understand me because they love me.